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Apr 30Liked by Susan Beneville

I could really feel the emotion and connection between Denric, Tasmin, and Becca. It increased the tension and sadness of Tasmin’s departure . Now I am in suspense wondering what important thing Tasmin forgot in her rush to get out! I’m looking forward to the next episode!

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Apr 18Liked by Susan Beneville

I went back and reread all the chapters before reading this one. What an exciting story! I'm already scared of the big woman with the poison blade🫣

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I was feeling anxious, and I couldn't for the life of me figure what was the matter. It was Tamsin! It was her upcoming journey. Even my heart was palpitating. I hate having to wait for the next installment. Patience may be a virtue but sure as hell isn't one of mine. Way to build the excitement. Wow!

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Apr 16Liked by Susan Beneville

I am rooting for Tamsin - of course. But I love all the characters. And the behind the scenes is illuminating, the way you have reserved for another time what Tamsin forgets to bring on her journey. You'll know when it gets revealed in the moment. Such spontaneous story making. Exciting to read!

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