I was drawn in by Tamsin's internal struggle - the painful, guilty burden's she is carrying from her family's history, her drive to redeem her family's honor, and to save her best friend. The healer and the prospect of healing her family, her friend, and her clan through her quest are really engaging. I love the story because it draws me into a fantasy world of limitless possibilities.
Just as much, I love your explanation of the game and how the "moves" are made. You are really good at simplifying complex concepts and explaining them in understandable terms for us lay folk.
The world disappears when I read your work. The problem is I'd rather stay in your world than mine! Question: Is it a common practice to write a story based on play?
I was drawn in by Tamsin's internal struggle - the painful, guilty burden's she is carrying from her family's history, her drive to redeem her family's honor, and to save her best friend. The healer and the prospect of healing her family, her friend, and her clan through her quest are really engaging. I love the story because it draws me into a fantasy world of limitless possibilities.
Just as much, I love your explanation of the game and how the "moves" are made. You are really good at simplifying complex concepts and explaining them in understandable terms for us lay folk.
I am glad you like the game behind the game.
Completely on the edge of my seat and mesmerized by Tamlin's dark red blade! Hard to wait for the next installment...
This is so good. No turning back now.
I can’t wait for what comes next!
The world disappears when I read your work. The problem is I'd rather stay in your world than mine! Question: Is it a common practice to write a story based on play?