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Kelley Gibler's avatar

Persevere! That is the take away for me. I need to be reminded to do that every second of every day. Thank you Tamsin! Thank you Susan! I wish that there had been more stories like this when I was coming up. Thank God there are now.

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Susan Beneville's avatar

That’s so true! I wish I had read more fantasy and scifi when I was growing up. Somehow, I was really mystery/history focused.

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Kenda's avatar

I really appreciate your post-script explanations of the gaming mechanics. I was thinking through what likely happened with challenges as I was reading. Got some of them right and learned more about others in your post-script. Thank you for those tutorials and perspectives. ❤️

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Susan Beneville's avatar

I love doing the Game Behind the Story bits almost as much as I like writing the story. Thanks for reading!

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Leslie Absher's avatar

I love the adventure of this installment, of being in the woods, slogging through rain and mud. It's an exciting landscape and I loved getting immerses in it!

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Susan Beneville's avatar

Whew! I was nervous about this one because it is the first episode where Tamsin is truly on her own. I'm still feeling out how much to delve into what she is thinking.

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Kenda's avatar

I love her internal dialogue - keep it up, please!

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Susan Beneville's avatar

That's good to hear. As a comic writer/screenwriter I am not used to writing the inner thoughts of the characters. So this is new for me!

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